I didn't really enjoy this cartoon. First off, the story. The whole "oh boy, the villian is a pervert" joke was not funny in the slightest and wasn't even unique to the source material. The whole animation was about some guy looking at porn. There's not much stuff that could be done to make it funny. However, at least this animation was trying to tell a joke (even if it fell flat), rather than shouting out painfully obvious references onto people's faces, so I'll give it that. But other than that, there's nothing interesting/funny about that unless you put in the time and effort to do so. Next time you make a parody animation, actually do some research, find something interesting, put a comedic spin on it, and overall, make it somewhat funny.
Next, the actual animation. I'll give it this, the art, colours and even the backgrounds were really well done, and I can definitely see you as a pretty good artist because of this. However, there was a lot of tweening & bouncing and not enough frame-by-frame animation & inbetweens, which sucks, since this animation was based on an action show. Also, the shading was a bit consistent. Sometimes, characters were shaded normally, but other times, the shading was completely black, or there was no shading at all. Unless if this is supposed to be a style, it just comes off as weird, unnatural, and amateur at best.
Finally, everything else. I liked the voice acting, but the music at the beginning was a bit too quiet, and I had to listen to it closely to find out that there was music in that scene. Also, I don't like the fact that the credits take up almost half the video (kinda like that one animation that you made).
So to sum up, the animation was sub-par at best, the "jokes" made were bad (but not as terrible as the previous video), the credits take up half the video, and overall, this video was crap. I can see you being a really good animator in the future, but with cartoons like these, I don't think you'll get very far in your career.
Just, try again.