Nice work to all of the animators who were on board!
(which would include me as well oof)
Nice work to all of the animators who were on board!
(which would include me as well oof)
Hi! This is RGPAnims, reporting live from Newgrounds.com, and I approve of this cartoon!!
In my opinion, the whole collab was kinda eh; nothing in it really caught my interest (except for that one 3D entry, even if the animation itself wasn’t all that good), and the animation quality was mixed between the different entries, so yeah.
BTW, I drew the detailed poster in Nano’s entry, if you’re wondering lol
The writing, voice acting, animation, and ESPECIALLY the comedic timing in this is brilliant. Keep up the good work! :)
please do more my child
To be honest here, I thought this was an improvement from before, but there's still a few problems here and there.
Let's get the cons out first.
First off, the audio quality wasn't really that good, but that can easily be fixed by going to publish setting and changing the audio quality there. Secondly, I think it would've been better if it was all coloured, because it looked more like an unfinished test than an actual video (unless the black and white colours are supposed to be a stylistic choice), and also, both the frame-by-frame animation and motion tweening could've used some more easing, to give more life to the movement. And finally, I'm not a big fan of the quality of the linework. The actual drawings themselves are fine, but the brush quality looks poor. I'd recommend changing the smoothing size to 50, and (if you're using a drawing tablet) also use pressure sensitivity, to add some flow and thickness in the lines. But that's just me. You can choose which style you prefer, as long as it's somewhat appealing, and looks good. Oh, and if I had to nitpick, I'd say that the brush size was fairly different in the first shot compared to all the other shots, which was somewhat annoying to me.
However, on the plus side, your posing's getting a lot better, and you're using a lot more frame-by-frame animation (even though there isn't really any easing in the movement, as stated before), so you're definitely improving over time, so it's not all bad. So yea, overall, it's not the best thing I've seen, but I can definitely see that you're improving in terms of animation, so that's good to see. Keep doing what you enjoy doing, and do the best you can do. Good luck. :)
Thank you, I did use pressure sensitivity, but that didn't seem to effect it to much. I did use differentiated line sizes across scenes, my mistake, i noticed halfway through that my linesize was too small. I'll attempt to make it better in my next one. Maybe add in dashes of color if i get the chance.
better than the ladybug collab
NOOOO!
Aussie animator, artist and graphic designer. Endlessly tired, but still kickin'.
Age 22, He/They
Animator
SAE University College '22
NSW, Australia
Joined on 1/7/14