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Overall, this cartoon was good, but could've used some work. In terms of animation for example, (as a little nitpick) there was one time where the colouring/shading of the left robot changed on 0:47. Next time you're making an animation, watch it first, and see if there's any errors. Other than that, I liked nearly all of the animation (including the small part by Freezepark), so good job on that.

However, the plot was lacking. I expected the robots to actually do the drug dealing (either in real-time, or a flashback), but all I got was two robots talking about their job. Sometimes, it's better to show, not tell. Also, there wasn't really any real conclusion to it, just some bomb blowing everyone up. I get that you were on a strict deadline, but that ending was simply lazy.
But, the voices were good (even if it didn't sound robotic), and the improv between the two characters was ok (even if the story was lacking)

In conclusion, keep up the good work, but remember to check the small things, and think twice about the story. ;) (Sorry if this was a long review, but I wanted to get my point out clear.)

To be somewhat honest, although the previous versions of this collab were bad, you did say this: "I've learned by now that not every short I get is good enough quality, so I think I'll be fine with editing both collabs myself." Yet all you did was rearrange the shorts and added a couple more. I know I'm a part of this collab, but still. Even though there were some decent animations (ChricCToons, Tylarius & maybe myself), it still the same as all the others. So next time you make a collab, put some quality control into it, or if you want to be like New Wave, at least some fun or EFFORT into it. That's all that I have to say. Just, try again.

StaticSkull responds:

I actually don't know who New Wave is, but I do a lot of collabs, because they're easy and fun.

Beautiful, and delicious. Maybe this could be a series?

Aussie animator, artist and graphic designer. Endlessly tired, but still kickin'.
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Freelance 2D Animator at Mashed

Ryan @RGPAnims

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SAE Institute '22

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